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structure challenge-------10 linesaabcdadcbathe topic is your choice...........Just Do It!
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Undulating hate seeks it's preyCoiling to strike... strike to slayBeady red eyes searching the nightTaste your scent... smell your fearSo close... divulged in your breathFeel the venom in fanged...
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angels sing through the piano keysand make out hearts sink to their kneesso tears may fill our eyesand sobs may choke our throatsthen the angels fly awaythey force their will as they pleaseto the...
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Excellent..........both are perfect. Thank you guys for participating
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she walks alone, biting her nailwhile go-kart boys chase some tailjumprope/piggyback play has come to an endronald mcdonald is overseasand he left his shoes behindshe walks alone to fetch the...
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haha... I thought it was kinda funny.... and hey dim one, I must say, I loved that.... the angel and the piano... that was simply painfully beautiful.... The Keeper of The Shadows,§tarless Night
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All three are wonderful pieces of PRECISE poetry.........I personally think it's fun to discipline yourself to a rhyme scheme.........wes, as usual, your brilliance strikes out of the...
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The blade how it dances, across the stage of flesh. The sing of pain like opera from the critics lips. The blood like red roses being tossed upon the stage. The sobing tears of the critic, perhaps to...
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whoops sorry forgot to break it up my apologies, for disrupting the flow of things.
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